Foodie Senses Tingling
I’ll be straight up honest. This one posed a challenge. Not the writing aspect, but the art. I spent way too much time penciling in the artwork trying to get everything just right. You see, every new strip offers a new challenge for me. I’m always looking at the last strip I did and asking myself, “what can I do to improve?” Lately, that challenge has been to work on consistency. Consistency in art style, in character design, and especially character size. I noticed that in Monday’s strip, I had Lucy gain three bra sizes and a little weight inside of the four panels.
Egad Lucy! My sincere apologies.
Anyway, in today’s strip, we find our hero, Duff, closing in on a talent that could pose useful…somewhere. Grub-therapist. Hmmmm, I like the sound of that. Let’s try to get that started shall we?
Cheer.
I like the term Grub Therapist. It has a more down to earth sound to it, plus it rolls so smoothly off the tongue.
Consistency in character size & proportion is what I often struggle with too. It can be tricky to be consistently consistent.
I’m trying to be more conscious of proportion and character construction.
Slice it, stack it, slather it, top it, serve it, and they will come.
oooo, like zombies. heh, see what I did there?
I hope Duffy is sensing I need one of those sandwiches right now! 😉
I think he’s thinking you’re more in line with chocolate cake therapy.
I love Duffy’s expression in the last panel!
If it’s any consolation, I didn’t notice any inconsistency in your characters. But it’s nice to hear when people want to focus on improving their art. 😀
That’s the thing. Not many notice things like that. Only the one’s who draw the stuff see the flaws.
That is a nice skill for sure. Except the grub part.
I think Duff needs a marketing plan. Grub might not be people friendly.
He can come with with me. Except I would look like jabba the hutt in two weeks.
There might be a waiting line for this guy.
Maybe Lucy has water-retention issues?
And, I need that bear!!!
She’s retaining too much ink. I think everyone needs a little Duff in their lives. 😉